Commentary Writing October 26, 2017 Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Commentary Writing Comments AnonymousNovember 3, 2017 at 11:56 AMYou did a good job of getting your point across, but there were some grammar issues and a bit repetitive. You also should also include more facts for your story to be more credible.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyUnknownNovember 3, 2017 at 11:59 AMI really like what you wrote because it brings awareness to a serious topic that needs more attention.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAdd commentLoad more... Post a Comment
You did a good job of getting your point across, but there were some grammar issues and a bit repetitive. You also should also include more facts for your story to be more credible.
ReplyDeleteI really like what you wrote because it brings awareness to a serious topic that needs more attention.
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